Need Criticism For Designs and Company

[Keyjibs]

Ok so I wanted to make a clothing company but I'm kinda just starting out with a few designs. I want to hear some feedback with my designs. I would really like constructive criticism over that design blows. None of these designs are finalized yet so i just want to hear what you guys think.

Here's just kind of a quick Company Design thing. The name I came up with was Maneck Clothing. Tell me if you like the name or should I go with something else. The logo is a sort of buildings or bars rising up. So the slogan I came up with was "Rising Above" again this is all just a trial to get a feel for if people like the company and designs. If I were to start this company the T-Shirts would all fit Longer and sort of slimmer. Not tall tee's but for sure they would fit longer and slimmer then your average tee but not like American Apparel slim and long. So I still need to do some research and find some good quality shirts. but here's mine designs so tell me what you think.

T-Shirt #1

T-Shirt #2

T-Shirt #3

So again I want to hear feedback and need some criticism on the designs and company. If all goes well I would love to venture out into the denim market but thats a long ways away so let me hear it guys.

Thanks.

 

[Alex=God]

I def like the first and second. But I think the third has like way to much going on

 

[artfullydodged]

first 2 are dope, drop some squares from #3

 

[joelle+cowbell]

#1 and #3 are my favorites. the color scheme on #3 looks tight! not crazy about #2 it's super hard to read...

 

[Malcolm]

i like the slogan and the building idea but im not too crazy about the writing on the 2nd t shirt

 

[BK]

keep designing. push yourself. and go tohttp://behance.net and surf for design. pulling influence is the best way to progress.

 

[heFF]

lookin really fresh and orgional keep it up diggin 1 and 3 for sure

 

[Grube]

i dont really like how on the buildings the small lines bend over, if they were straight it would look better

 

[TWoods]

I like the first one. Letterspacing needs some work on Maneck.

I want you to look at you designs and think about something. I want you to look at your white space and think about the shapes it makes. How the shapes that the white makes work with the other shapes of in the shirt. Think about if the created shapes interact and fit with the positive. thinking about that is just as important as thinking about the graphics you create to begin with.

 

[chrisbcreme]

all three of em are ill