Need a critique for a promo video before tomorrow.

[TaranItUp]

Rip it apart, haven't messed with any colors or made the final edits, this is just a rough cut, but would love a critique before I finish anything up. Thank you. Only on youtube because I don't have a plus Vimeo account and the account I am uploading I can't access.

 

[Childstar.]

Audio was weak, the dialogue track could use some cleaning up, and the music track could be at a lower volume when dialogue is occurring.

Try and fix those white balance issues, might be a stretch to fix now, but inside the clothing shop and hair studio people looked as orange as oompa loopas.

 

[TaranItUp]

Thank you, I was Ill prepared for the interview and was stuck with a video mic on camera. I'll try and clean it up though, the music is already down -6 and the interview is up +12, so I will see what I can do. Haven't messed with the colors yet, but definitely need to be more aware of white balance while filming.