My not winning traveling circus poem :(

[Shaky_Jake]

Try to follow along as they jib

with steeze

Rail to rail or

wherever they please

Across the

States in beat down cars

Vermont

to California, or beyond the stars

Even

I am floored at their style and grace

Looking

like a gaper with that blank stare face

I cant explain how they do what they do

No one can compare, I mean "what...

Jossi who?"

Going and going and

going GONE!

Cant compare,

and you cant relate

Ian Compton

is god, it must be fate

Really

I'm floored, I cant find words

Circus

in town? Good times for sure

Under

no man as they drive by the mile

Ski

east to west, having fun all the while

 

[Shaky_Jake]

for those of you who couldn't tell, the first letter of every sentence spells out "traveling circus"...

 

[rontonsoop]

i see what you did there.. lol +k for being creative.

 

[BMB]

damn, that's a winner in my book

 

[Chompo.]

That actually wasn't bad

 

[elemeno89]

possibly one of the greatest things ive ever read here on ns. good work on the creativity and rhyming. haha

 

[Big5hifty]

that was pretty good man. definitely one of the better things ive read on here

 

[apcaipse]

That's a pretty rad poem.

 

[Spinoza]

wow i loved it even before i read your post about it spelling out traveling circus

well done

 

[.frenchy]

dope poem, +k

 

[AdolfShitler]

mine went like this:

Andy and Will are good skiers

I like them

They make me lol

The End

 

[TURTLEMAN1]

+k for having one of the sweetest poems i've ever read

 

[Shaky_Jake]

It took me like 10 minutes to write, so I probably should have revised it a couple times through. But oh well, the poem that won was pretty epic.

 

[PDeg]

wow i neevr relised it spelled out tc till the first comment

 

[deleted5]

who won?

 

[JahJahBinks]

I entered, but lost.

 

[steezbox]

I do believe "steeze" is spelled without an "e" at the end. I however am not sure completely, but it makes more sense to me.

 

[Malcolm]

its with an e. and your last sentence didnt make much sense

 

[TOK]

did you actually submit this? I'm only questioning the submission because it wasn't a winner

 

[gus555]

i nearly shit my pants when i found out it spells traveling circus