My First Sequence - Feedback Please

skodeo7

skodeo7

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My first sequence. As for the smudging on the edges, I decided to do that at the last minute instead of just leaving it plain.

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Junction 133 Productions
 
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ps. I know I forgot to fix the rail smoothness. I need to fix that.

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Junction 133 Productions
 
i am not good with that stuff at all, but maybe if you put your camera on a tripod, the sequence would be rectangular without all that black space. Just a suggestion.

-Chris Peck
 
Thanks, yeah it was from a follow cam. It was really challenging because the first half of the shot has his head cut off, so I had to get real creative with that (frames 2-6 had no head).

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I know how hard that had to be, especially if you were working with shots from a follow cam. You did a nice job and I like the layering! (skis cross over the other skis from the next frame and work with the poles)

very nicely done.

Eat. Sleep. Breathe. Ski.

 
yeah thats nice, but maybe do a few less images of the skier so they arent touching

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i like the smudging, and those are some good shots considering it was a follow. i give it an 8 out of 10.

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