My first edit ever. please watch

A.R.

A.R.

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so this is my first edit ever of me and a friend goofin around on his frontyard rail.please rate it up!

 
good 1st edit man, seemed a little rushed in spots but that will change with practice, keep doin work
 
yea, i know this is one of those cliche annoying ns threads, im just pumped to see myself make a decent edit. sorry if i annoyed you.
 
dope edit for sure, but a taller/longer rail would make it a lot doper. but it looks fun to messaroundon/learn shit on
 
yea we have a 25 foot pipe thats about 2.5 feet off the ground in the backyard. this one is just so much fun
 
mount that rail on something for sure. but real sick. be thankful that you have snow in your yard. my mountain doesn't even haave snow yet
 
good editing and skiing but id make the rail alot higher and keep the lip of the jump below the rail
 
yea man, its just something to mess around on, check a couple of post up, i said we have a 25 foot pipe in the backyard 2.5 feet high. this one is just fun to goof around on and learn stuff. and the lip is level with the rail, not higher.
 
i like it alot

what i think is you had shots other than hitting it at the beginning and end and it was just constant hitting for like a minute and a half or so, just watch having clip after clip of you and your friend hitting the rail.

like said before^^^^ i like how you changed the camera angles, changed it up
 
pretty good job for ur first time editing! i want to do that something like that set up in my yard to get better at it
 
looks like an ABS rail

easily found at home depo t

and edit wise:i thought it was sick

only thing i suggest is turning off the background sound

most edits/movies have the whole thing without original sound and then just a few shots with orig sound

plus i think it sounds better when you dont have the sound of skiing on the inrun every shot
 
good job man. for having a bunch of shots of that little rail you made it pretty interesting to watch. good song choice too. You will def. be able to put out some dope shit once you get more variety of shots and stuff.
 
Good skiing, good music and good filming. Overall good edit, just add some different effects to the video like some slow-mo's of the tricks you thought were amazing, and some transitions or something just to mix it up.
 
really great job man for a 1st edit. The first 45 secs or so was a little rushed, then the middle was really good. The last could of shots looked a little choppy. Awesome angels, especially the in front of the rail, some edits you see the camera is too high, yours was dead on. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see your edits through out the year man.
 
were one of you wearing 2 different boots?

but sick edit for your first, like others have said it looked a little rough and choppy in spots, but overall pretty good
 
sick dude! only suggestion is cut ur bfooty to the beat once in a while and dont have prolonged shots from one angle of putting on stuff. and fade out ur song. otherwise looked fun and really really dope first edit
 
I'm tired of these kinds of edits. Good stuff though but if you're just foolin around I would have more a fun song with it.
 
ahaha so true the cops told me that the biggest crackhouse is just down the dtreet from me and i live in a good part of town ahaha
 
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