The only thing I would say is since you're using a fisheye, try to get closer. I think fisheyes are great because you can get alot of the subject in the shot when you're super close up, but they can really take away from a subject in a shot if you're too far back.
That a little thing though, the shots are really good.
Thought the edit was solid. Aside from what's already been said here the only thing i would say took away from it was the song choice, but that's more subjective than anything you did poorly. Nice work over all though!