Let me know what you guys think of this!

[alvy.]

What's up NS! I am an aspiring Producer and have finally completed my latest track. I would love to hear your opinions and criticism to help me improve for my next song!

Thanks NS. Love you guys

 

[alvy.]

whoopz

 

[Bmo.]

i dont know much about producing, but i know what i like in electronic music.-the kick was way too prominent and loud, sounded really forced

-sound used for the melody was boring and sounded very 'stock', if you will

-melodies were alright, but it sounded like there was too much at times. im a fan of minimalism, look at Arguru by deadmau5 for an example of what i mean but making the melody simple.

-trying adding in some more chords

-the drop has potential but doesnt flow well with the rest of the song. i think you should keep it the way it is and put more effort into the rest of the song

-honestly think it would sound better if it was sped up a bit

not a bad song, just could use some work. hope this helps!

 

[alvy.]

That helps a lot. I have been having a lot of problems with getting the kick to sound right in the song, it's always either too loud or too soft..so I went with too loud haha.

Thanks for the response! +K