Just finished my English essay

[Ya_like_jazz]

I tryed to listen to all of your advice and here is the final product

 

[Idahoe]

First mistake: Listening to us for help on an English essay. besides that, its pretty gud.

ok i just read it for real: why is it so short?

**This post was edited on Jan 28th 2019 at 1:00:10pm

 

[DirtYStylE]

Second mistake: you didn't listen to me. This was English 101 stuff. You need 5 paragraphs. Introduction with three supporting claims. One paragraph for each claim then the conclusion paragraph. cmoooon

 

[MFZOREN]

The paragraphs are each like a sentence lol. You might be pretty young or something but a paragraph usually needs to be at least 5 sentences. The double spaces aren't fooling anyone,

 

[Coochieman7]

The paragraphs are each like a sentence lol. You might be pretty young or something but a paragraph usually needs to be at least 5 sentences. The double spaces aren't fooling anyone,

He is 12 and also retarded

 

[TRVP_ANGEL]

ctrl + A, backspace.

 

[WoFIowz]

Hold the following for liftoff: windows + E

 

[xxACIDTRIPxx]

You expect me to read all that? Where the fuck is the cliffs

 

[vibecheck]

He is 12 and also retarded

Uh oh not the r word!

 

[MiIfHunter]

? ?

Uh oh not the r word!

 

[vibecheck]

? ?

REEEEE word

**This post was edited on Oct 28th 2020 at 9:25:05pm

 

[Bended_Toenail]

Lmao reading that was funny, until I saw you were an 11th grader. When I was a junior I wrote 14 pages on AI and got a B+. I can't imagine what kind of grade you got on that.

 

[yungona]

Lmao reading that was funny, until I saw you were an 11th grader. When I was a junior I wrote 14 pages on AI and got a B+. I can't imagine what kind of grade you got on that.

the teacher saw how much of a fucking nerd you are lol... anyways... 14 pages in junior year? how the fuck is that allowed?

 

[Bended_Toenail]

the teacher saw how much of a fucking nerd you are lol... anyways... 14 pages in junior year? how the fuck is that allowed?

Lmao probably, there was someone in my class that year that wrote 36 pages on why Trump is bad and then got it published somewhere. She was a nerd. the essay was supposed to be over 10 but idk.

 

[ASAPCarter]

Even though it was short...

 

[dawnbailey1974]

The essay is pretty short. I would suggest extending it. But to be honest, it's better to ask for advice really qualified people or compmanies like https://www.the-essays.com/ instead of strangers on the forum. Nobody knows if the forum user has enough knowledge of experience to suggest some meaningful ideas.

**This post was edited on Apr 14th 2021 at 6:13:45am