Jus need sum quick help with eng Thx

[pink_powder]

well for eng we had to do a expresive paragraph or whatnot and well i extreamly suck at english so i was wondering if u guys can just take a quick glance at what i whrot and just help me out

it would really be apriciated

well i had to write the paragraph about a some short story called "twelfth Summer"

this is what the instruction was "what are the three strongest qualities that motivate the narrator in the story twelfth summer?"

here is what i got it

(i no like none of you read the story it really dosent matter) i really need some help making a conclusion as well

plz don't make fun of me for my extreamy poor english skills

well this is it

While reading Twelvth summer I found there are quite a

few qualities that modivate the narator throughout the story but

that there are three domenant qualites. First off is jelousy. The

narrator is jelous that Sonny gets all the attention from thier perants

and she is just ignored. An example of this would be when her father

decideds to let sonney cast instead of her evan though she is much

older and wasn't alowed to cast untill a few weaks ago.

Her jelousy of her brother motivates her to want be known when she

grows up and get a trouphy. Evan though she can't decide between a poet

actress or diver she knows she will be famous and her parents will pay

more attention to her. A second quality that motivates the narrator is

confidence. She is confident in her self that when she grows up she

will be famoue even though she gets no support from her parents. As she

says in the book she could picture herself getting awarded for winning

a trophy for diving/acting/writing a poem. A third quality i found that

motivats the charecter is honesty. She is honest throughout the story

and evan though most of the time she doesn't admit stuff out loud she

is honest to herself. A good example of this is when Sonny leave for

his first day of work and she admits to herself that she was lonsome

for him. She is being honest to herself because she admites that she is

a bit jelous of him and also obviusly that she misses him.

 

[mark_skis]

you gotta be kidding

 

[Mt_P0wDerJuNkIe]

just say wether you liked the book or not. then explain your answer with details and ya that should do it.

 

[pink_powder]

first off it was like a story of like 2 pages and second of all u diddnt read what i said

don't reaply without reading

 

[anothermammothpunk]

pink is definatly NOT punk

 

[freeskier824]

wow have you ever heard of spell checker? when everything is underlined in red, thats NOT good. i read the first line. you actually misspelled the same word two different ways in the same sentence. unbelievable.

 

[pink_powder]

my ms word is not working so i had to do it in note pad

and ya as i mentiond i suck at english

plz sumone just help me out it'll take like 5 min you don't haveto spellcheck just help me make it better plz

 

[dman1260]

even, not evan. evan is a name.

 

[skier_boy26]

well start by trying to type in english first, you know, in daily life, because your spelling for stuff is horrid

start there