Internship edit crituqe- no skiing

jibcrew1

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Shot for a under armor internship filmed it edited it, any advice for something next time would be nice.

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If you're applying for an internship it needs to be flawless.

Too juddery, either use a tripod/do better with the glidecam.

 
im not applying the person in it is and if you could point out where it was "juddery" that would be helpful
 
your glidecam work is pretty good! but you can tell when you "jerk" it back and forth when he is talking in the batting cage

also when you are sitting with him and he is on his phone, you can easily tell that you are holding it yourself and not on a tripod because it "wiggles" back and forth ever so slightly
 
thanks and when he's on the phone its on a glidecam and i was just holding it as steady as i can and pulled the focus with my hand
 
i knew it wasnt perfect but it was the best time he did the speech and the most usable shot i might add that it had to be 40 seconds long or else i would have opened up the shots to better and more movement
 
Like its already been stated...glidecam needs work. minor movements are okay but you were shaking like a dogs tail back and forth. also the audio could have been more crisp
 
i think the ending should be a little less sudden. something as simple as a fade out should fix that though. im talking about where it goes from video to credits. just throw in a nice little transition there and i like it. great work other than that
 
as said before it had to be forty seconds i just added the credits but we are shooting another one today and will take all options into consideration
 
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