so this isn't a criticism of your edit in particular, but of concert edits in general. It really irks me when peoples motions don't line up to the music. for example, the DJ doing the 'bounce' motion with his arm, but on upbeats, or not in sync with the music at all, or the crowd jumping, dancing, or whatever but not to the music.
This is an issue with almost every single concert edit I've seen, and it seems to me, especially with EDM that sticks predominantly to the same 4/4 tempo, it wouldn't be hard to make clips of people dancing line up with the music.
other than that, solid filming and such.