I will Start with the good stuff, and nuboss, please actually read this,because i'm putting some time into it.
After you stepped in, the park definately DEFINATELY improved. i cannot stress that enough. you stepped it up big time, and the transformation of the park was truly impressive considering the short time you had to work with. I think the jumps were fine. i especially loved the second, sort of stepoverish one. Continue with that style i think it worked best. the jumps were definately fun once they had landings, and that cannon box at the end was sick, reaaallly fun. so was that gap jump to the landing. The bottom pad worked really well in my opinion.
I would try to put a third jump in towards the top, get that three jump action going. Maybe go Stepdown 20ish feet, kinda poppy into a 30 true table, into a 40 stepoverstyle. IF YOU WANT TO DRAW THE PARK CROWD, BIGGER, SMOOTH JUMPS ARE NEEDED. and if they can't be big, make em poppy.
As for rails, just pay attention to them. None of this ride on, totally buried bullshit. i get it, you need to have beginner features, but don't have beginner set ups to "expert"(god i hate that term) rails.i say right at the turn, with the exception of the bottom pad, which i would like to see replicated), focus on rails. vary the set up. get urban style and regular style lips mixed in, and just mix it up.
Worf was right, the events sucked. I know you don't have a lot of say, but don't hold rail jams on stalker, ever again. Also, you don't want to have features in the rail jam that are neccesarily difficult to slide, but allow poeple to really showcase rail tricks.
and, once again i know not really your department, but push for a goddamn park pass. have the angel drop park require a special pass to enter, and have stalker not require one. and enforce it. so many park and pipe crew guys do nothing, so just have one of them do nothing but check park passes.
and you should really aprrecaite this, because i won't even be riding whitetail next year, as its college time fo me. but when i come back for christmas, shit better be legit.