Hit me with some criticism.

[Smithzsmith]

My so my boy from school (Native son)(E. Parker) just let out a single with one of his boys. Hes the second of the two and his part starts around 1:58. Lets here some criticism and get some views as well.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u9efypxZobM&feature=share

+k for views and helpful criticism.