Help with poetry

Reed.S

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Hey guys were doing poetry right now in high school and I need to find 2 words that sound beautiful to me. I already have one(Opening Day) but I want some more about skiing. Thanks for the help!
 
Opening Day

It is the single greatest day

That any skier could imagine.

You wake up at 6 A.M.

To be the first in line

You have waited six months

And it has finally come.

You have spent all of your summer

Going to ski camps,

Skiing in your backyard,

And practicing flips off the diving board

It is the day where you meet all of the friends

From last year who truly understand you

They also know what it is like on opening day

So for those of you who do not understand?

I am a skier and I cannon wait for opening day.

I made this in like 5 min
 
wow. you should be like famous. i actually really like it. for real.

Probs be that only poem that i tought wahs goodand i acttally like in like uhh??? 13 years

Props bro
 
Fixed it all but here goes another

Opening Day

It is the single greatest day

that any skier can imagine.

You wake up at 6 A.M.

to be the first in line

you have waited six months

and it has finally come.

You have spent all of your summer

Going to ski camps,

Skiing in your backyard,

And practicing flips off the diving board

You ride up that beautiful metal chairlift

And reflect upon how this day came

Those countless hours watching ski movies

And the videos on YouTube

But most importantly having the days counted down

In your schools assignment book until December 1st

It is the day where you meet all of the friends

From last year who truly understand you

They also know what it is like on opening day

and do the same things you did during those six months

So for those of you who do not understand?

I am a skier and I cannot wait for opening day.

 
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