^bottom one looks pretty good, especially for one week in. and dont take this the wrong way but DONT paint for a while, you will regret it in a year. work in your blackbook, look up cans/caos/inks. NEVER use .99 cent cans, always rusto or OLD krylon. also look up how too make a kiwi mop, its actually better than most graffiti markers (imho) and can get everything you need from a store.               But really just lurk bombing science all day/graffiti videos on youtube, and practice A LOT. anytime there is paper infront of you do some tags/throwies for practice.