I feel like that could have been edited with windows movie maker, not premiere pro and AE. And no one wants to watch shots of the same kids doing sketchy straight airs and 50-50 boxes for 3 minutes. We all start somewhere, but you guys should spend less time filming and more time actually learning to ski.
it looks like you know how to use the programs and the cameras, but the skiing is a little lack luster. perhaps you have a future being the filmer of your group, but i would maybe be a little more selective about what clips you use for your edit. personally i would rather watch 10 good clips as opposed to 50 not so good ones. it looks like your fairly young though so keep at it. i wish i was as good with a camera when i was your age
Why did you use AE ? I don't see any color grading, whatever, I totally agree with first comment, all I can add however, is you are beginners in both, film and ski and that's very respectable IMO. Keep it up and you'll see, things get in place.