a) No need to post two threads, you're not getting different outcomes.
b) You've already posted your stuff.
c) NS has already told you what we think about it.
d) Suburbia's not hood.
...listen man. It's cool that you're making music and all, I dig the effort. But do something more original, because the gangster, Mac Miller white boy party scene thing has already been done, and done better than you can do it. Start speaking about shit you know, the people you know, the things you've seen. Because this party bullshit is stupid and played, sorry to tell ya.
That's the most serious response you'll get here, almost guaranteed.