Go ahead tear me apart guys

[Beez]

critique it!

watch in hd

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[Algebra]

TEAR HIM APART!

 

[Jaymon]

WHTE BALANCE AND STABILIZE AND EXPOSURE AAAARRRGRHGH!!!

 

[Tanner-D]

ended way to abruptly

 

[Dub_Digital]

watch ur whites

 

[Smokey.]

WB, stabilization, repetitive shots/angles/tricks, abrupt ending.

 

[chris.goodhue]

there were some usless shots in there, just random ones, also make sure the shots are focused correctly

 

[juicedrummer11]

some shots were too long and could have been trimmed down a bit. also white balance between the two clips was off a little and the ending was way too abrupt. other than that not too bad

 

[WillStart]

in my opinion, going out of your way to tell people to watch in hd makes you sound like you completely lack confidence in your own work and you think the only redeeming quality is that you filmed it in HD.

just something that has always bugged me.

i watched in HD and SD and that didn't change the fact that the white balance was still off.

 

[WillStart]

also, that song was used in a Theory 3 movie, I believe it was Photo Play. but i don't blame you too much because that was a long time ago and it's a good song.

 

[DANETRON]

is that all gore has set up so far? whiteface has a ton of stuff

 

[Beez]

ya............. gore sucks