Give me some feedback on my music

[anomericas]

Yo NS

I recently acquired Reason 4.0 and a midi keyboard and have been trying to make some tunes. Listen to my newest creation and give me some feeback. At least let it get bumpin before you stop listening.

http://www.muziboo.com/thelosian/music/feedback

 

[saucybiscuits]

good foreground beat, but the background seems way too jumbled and confusing. maybe ease off the crazy shit in the background. don't completely eliminate it, just tone it down a bit.

 

[CLASH]

Not really my thing, but pretty decent for what it is. Can you play bass? I think some non synthesized bass would add a lot.

 

[OhMyBosh]

sounds like your trying to throw in as many random effects as you can in there... keep it simple dude...

it has potential to be cool chil beats, but theres too much annoying random shit in there and the melody/beat never really progresses much.

 

[anomericas]

word all good advice, it's hard to keep it in control when there are so many ways to tweak every little sound

 

[ThaLorax]

wayyy too much going on all at once. you got the right idea, just spread the effects out more.