First website critique

.monster.

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So this is the first website I have made learned ever thing from scratch from online tutorials in about 1 1/2 months every thing is done my hand except the jquery, definitely stoked on it I mean it works for a first site but I have still have a lot to learn, its never good enough and can not wait to learn way more and start making supper sick sites, Thanks please no hate
http://switchoneapparel.com
 
pretty sick, only thing i could find that i didn't like about it was the menu buttons at the top were all crammed together after i was in one of the pages, maybe space them out a lil
 
Slow down the image scrolling.

Have someone who understands the English language proof read your copy. There is a ton of stuff going wrong in there.

Your "who we are" section is entirely too long across the page. Aim for 40-60 characters.

Format your copy so you don't have so many weird line breaks.
 
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