First timelapse Feedback

[JAlps]

Hey guys! I was wondering if I could grab some feedback for my first timelapse (and actually the first thing I have ever shot and edited). The shot is not very interesting, since I don't yet have the right storage to shoot the amount of photos I need (can only keep it rolling for about an hour at a time) but anything you have in terms of the editing would be amazing! Oh also I used LRTimelapse and Lightroom just like the tutorial on this page.

[video]https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/808939/First-Timelapse-Atempt-[/video]

 

[grantwhitty]

Though the time-lapse is pretty plain; panning from left to right or vice-versa always makes lapses a little more appealing to the eye.

I would have a more interesting subject next time around, maybe a sunset w/ clouds or a storm rolling in, etc.

 

[uturn]

the framing is pretty bad... could have been cool