First Sequences Critique Please

[skithe49th]

Hey I shot these up at Key a while back, lemme now what you think. Click to make them bigger.

 

[king.of.gnarnia]

in the first few picts having a few more shots before the take off would have have made it legit. but nice work tho

 

[*Nickdel*]

those are looking real good man. keep it up. maybe try to get a little closer if possible.

 

[icantskiiFILM]

u fucked up the second to last

 

[skithe49th]

haha yeaa. i know but shit happens. i tried fixing it but it just ended up looking worse than it is now

 

[iannelson]

Thoes look way sick. My favorite is the third one up from the bottom.

 

[petesguitar1]

They look good dude.

 

[^nate^]

the skies are kinda of "glowing" which leads me to think you are trying to cut them out of each sequential photo and then lay them over an original background.
i might be wrong tho, if that's how you're doing it though you should really try layer masking instead.
lookin good tho.

 

[skithe49th]

yeaa thats what i did just cause i shot them without a tripod and there were minor shakes just from not being able to hold my arm steady for the whole time. I tried layering them but it just turned out shitty. Another reason I didn't do it this way was the shots looking down the lip of the jump the skiers overlapped alot in layering so i had to fix that too. Next time I plan on using a tripod though.

 

[c-kennz]

Most of them look really good so far. The 4th and 5th ones are from a really bad angle- it's hard for the eye to separate the different phases of the trick. The second to last sequence (the one on the rail) is a good angle for most of it, but you'll probably miss any trick off the end of it unless you zoomed it in.