doesnt have to do with the editing, but it was super shaky. i guess theres nothing you can do about it now but think about it for next time.
youre still going overboard with the b/w and color stuff. also the edit was really fast paced - you cut really close after each shot, it was like you were trying to cram too much footage into the edit.
and also it felt kinda unorganized, try and put all the park stuff together and the big mountain stuff together. its weird to watch a cork 7, some pow turns, then a rail.
my .02