First Edit Critique

[dwhite]

I admit, I really had no idea what I was doing when I made this. I got my Gopro and was just experimenting with some of the shots. My friends and I aren't very good, but it was fun to make a simple video like this.
I guess I'm just looking for some tips and things to improve on....because there is a lot.

 

[butteredpretzel]

since the go pro has no zoom function, i reccomend standing much closer to the jumps or rails when you film, or even follow caming them. i liked the song tho, what is it?

 

[A.Eberhard]

Get Closer to the feature and throw in more follow me cams. For the editing just watch videos get some ideas apply them to your edits should make the video much better.

 

[Mooserz]

I liked the camera on pole shots for some reason. A lot. im going to have to try that.