First edit, backyard setup

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this is my first ski edit. i usually use final cut but this is my first time using sony vegas. please excuse the super corny text at the end. i am in the black saga sweatshirt and grey pants. friend trevors in the grey. and any critique on the skiing, editing, filming and anything is welcomed. well have at it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pA99KC0IqHQ&feature=feedu

 

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embedd?