Feedback on these Band Posters I Made.

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WiscoSkiing

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Teaching myself photoshop and made some posters for my pals in the band Raptor Octavius.

[URL}https://imgur.com/gallery/qbnOG[/URL]

The first is inspired by their song Peachy and their name Octavius

The second is a gig poster inspired by their song Son of my Sun

The genre is hard rock with a dash of psychedelic/groove

Thanks for the constructive criticism!
 
re-work the leaves on the top one, they have little white borders on them still. Also change the palette, the peach isn't bright or strong enough. Second one is cool but use a simpler and cleaner font.
 
13767407:death_grips said:
re-work the leaves on the top one, they have little white borders on them still. Also change the palette, the peach isn't bright or strong enough. Second one is cool but use a simpler and cleaner font.
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The link doesn't even work. How are you seeing these? It says they have been moved or deleted when I clicky.
 
^ thanks I guess I could've taken a second to figure that one out

I like the image on the second one. I feel like there is too much going on in the text as well.

The first one is cool, I don't really know what I like about it. I don't dislike anything, though.
 
not bad but not that original... pretty cliche cyber goth sadboy garbage idk maybe try and do something original
 
Dig the vapourware esc aestetic on the first one. You really need to re work the leaves somehow tho. Like put maybe more of them? Idk

Second is cool too. But the top of the poster has lots of emptyness all around the title and is super busy in the lower section.

Good job overall.
 
13767407:death_grips said:
re-work the leaves on the top one, they have little white borders on them still. Also change the palette, the peach isn't bright or strong enough. Second one is cool but use a simpler and cleaner font.
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13767474:theabortionator said:
Are these for promo or merch?
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Both. The white one is for sure merch but will be used for promo (adding show dates to poster) and the peach is more mysterious promo but if people want it they can give me a lil money. Thanks for the feedback btw. Will link redesign to you soon.
 
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