Feedback for film class

[J_MAC]

Just looking for some constructive feedback i whipped this up last minute so i know its gona blow but just looking for some feedback so i can make necessary changes b4 its due in 10 hours

waterr final from Johny Mac on Vimeo.

 

[skibumb2929]

looks good man

 

[TijmenDal]

Classic M&A feedback.

 

[Auzy]

I'd says a little less slow motion

 

[CrotchKiller]

loud, i think they were splashes, were too loud