Edit critique

ZeMagnificentKev

ZeMagnificentKev

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So here's an edit I threw together with only a couple days shots, I am gonna hopefully add some more soon, just hoping to get some constructive critism on the overall feel so far, thanks for any posts!

 
Some things I noticed:

-You need to work on color correction

-Turn off frame blending when doing slo mo (really shouldn't even be doing slo mo unless you have a higher fps camera)

-Yellow strobing. why?

-No one wants to watch you put the camera up to your neck/mouth and have the screen get dark red

- One thing I noticed was when they landed after the rail, you kept filming and then it got really shaky. You wanna cut that shit out. Keep your clips tight.

-Couldn't really see what was going on at night. The dog shot was a nice addition though. Again, don't leave the extra footage of you moving the camera around after a shot in there

- As you were fading out in the end I could see it cut to a new clip. Fade faster

Keep making edits and you will get better every time!
 
13228453:[tk said:
]Some things I noticed:

-You need to work on color correction

-Turn off frame blending when doing slo mo (really shouldn't even be doing slo mo unless you have a higher fps camera)

-Yellow strobing. why?

-No one wants to watch you put the camera up to your neck/mouth and have the screen get dark red

- One thing I noticed was when they landed after the rail, you kept filming and then it got really shaky. You wanna cut that shit out. Keep your clips tight.

-Couldn't really see what was going on at night. The dog shot was a nice addition though. Again, don't leave the extra footage of you moving the camera around after a shot in there

- As you were fading out in the end I could see it cut to a new clip. Fade faster

Keep making edits and you will get better every time!
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thanks alot!
 
Whatever program you're using, don't use slo mo in it. The sound is brutal to listen to. I'd only use it if you cut/fade the sound out before than. Since you're shooting pretty wide I'd also (depending on what software you're using) use a little image stabilization. You have to play around with it for awhile before it turns out good and doesn't have any screen tearing though.
 
13229491:CameraWiz said:
Whatever program you're using, don't use slo mo in it. The sound is brutal to listen to. I'd only use it if you cut/fade the sound out before than. Since you're shooting pretty wide I'd also (depending on what software you're using) use a little image stabilization. You have to play around with it for awhile before it turns out good and doesn't have any screen tearing though.
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Ya that it does, great advice thanks a bunch
 
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