Edit Critique :)

[SassySloth]

Just would like to know how im doing. Colors, Angles, everything.

+K for feedback

Thanks

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HD Link:http://vimeo.com/31669924

 

[Bateman]

Good job

Constructive Critique:

Keep you camera a little bit more still

And try to do slower, more sleeker movements, / you could allso slow mo it. For instance when you film those aferbangskis

Get some inspiration:

Check out this awesome piece of cinematographyhttp://vimeo.com/channels/ski#31529563

Allso this norwegian editor / FIlm Crew "Dedicated Pictures" Series called public holiday:
http://vimeo.com/channels/publicholiday

Good luck

 

[monkatizer]

that was sooo sick.

except, the shakyness of the cam really takes away from it! i highly recommend getting a nice tripod and those shots will come out smooth as fuck.

 

[[J_Gasper]]

it was pretty sick.

the song has been used a million times, so next time try to be original. try to get some sort of stabilization, if you find your self wanting to use shots where you move, get a glidecam. also, a decent tripod will help a TON. a tripod is a necessity when it comes to filming. also, i think it was a little over edited. when you have shots where he moves throughout the frame being choppy, its cool to use once or twice. not every other shot. also at the beginning try to keep those in to out or out to in focus shots at a minimum. colors looked pretty good to me. some dope skiing, i like how you changed up the angles a ton. looked like a fun time!

 

[k-fred]

great overall edit!

like others said, a little bit shaky

 

[cwillygood]

cool angles for the most part

like the others said, the shakyness really took away from the edit, i think the song was a little to deep for the edit if you know what i mean, skiing was cool, the editing was pretty choppy too, try to be a little more flowy, smoothers

the color looked pretty good though