Edit Critique

jamers

jamers

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Hi NS, making a critique thread for my latest edit. Filmed on a GoPro and a D7000 on a tripod. Second edit ive ever made, wanted to get some feedback/constructive criticism.

Jibsy Edit from Ryan Gilbane on Vimeo.

Rapper of the first song Providence is Doze One, a local rapper from RI, check his stuff out at http://www.dozeoneproductions.com/
 
change the song to heavy rap. that'll cover every trait ever in skiing. ever.
but seriously, sick edit. liked the vibe
 
Try loosening up that tripod. If you're going to follow the rider out of the shot, then do it. Glitchy/jerky shots and pans (in these circumstances) wasn't very visually appealing, it disrupts the flow of the edit. Over all I liked it, just some fine tuning on the filming and it'll be really good.
 
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