Edit Critique, Perhaps?

[Forcillo]

Hey guys, so this is the first edit I actually put some time into, tried to get some artificial sounds in there to sound real, and pretty much just tried whatever my little, beginner brain could do to make it good. +K for legit tips, and be harsh!

 

[ForeverYung]

A lot of your shots cut off a bunch of the skier. It works for one or two shots but its was too much

 

[Forcillo]

I noticed this when I watched it again. Thanks. Would a wider lens help this at all? Or is it just a framing issue while filming?

 

[special-J]

get better at filming. I don't mean to sound like an ass in saying that, just a simple way to make an edit so much more impressive is to have your framing right. A wider lens could help but that would also give the shot a different style.

also, if you're going to use shots that are supposed to be funny, don't throw them into the mix with a serious edit and rap music. You have to have some sort of separation (unless you really know what you're doing and can pull it off.)

 

[ForeverYung]

I don't know jack shit about filming so I can't answer that haha.