Edit Critique +k
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tcgoldman
Member
not terrible but, Choose a different song, that song does not fit that edit. when you pick a new song edit to the way the song flows. put cuts and slow motion or faster motion shots where they fit in the song. also don't put to many words in your video and if you do keep them discreet. you did say you were going to color correct, thats good. the color needs some "correcting". don't take this too hard I'm just trying to help. your edit is alright but I'm trying to help you make it better.keep it up!
FatWhore
Active member
I had its good parts and bad parts, but if I were you i'd...
1.Get better stablization, the whole thing was shakey
2. Get more of a story at the start, not just random half a second, shots.
3. Burn the lens at 0:50, I hate those shity fisheyes like that.
4.Get out there and shot man! youl'l start to get better and better every edit!
1.Get better stablization, the whole thing was shakey
2. Get more of a story at the start, not just random half a second, shots.
3. Burn the lens at 0:50, I hate those shity fisheyes like that.
4.Get out there and shot man! youl'l start to get better and better every edit!
chris.goodhue
Member
you guys are crazy! some gnarly stuff in there! to add to the other comments i think some of the shots cuz off too quickly
BolderPro
Member
meh it was okthings to fix
to many cut scenes for that slow of a song
bad color
frame rate or shutter speed was off ( idk if u can fix this depends on camera, go pros can fix it if thats what your using which i assume)
stabilization needs fixed
and cheesy title font and design
but other than that it was a decent edit
to many cut scenes for that slow of a song
bad color
frame rate or shutter speed was off ( idk if u can fix this depends on camera, go pros can fix it if thats what your using which i assume)
stabilization needs fixed
and cheesy title font and design
but other than that it was a decent edit
j.benziger
Member
Dubstep shouldn't be in ski edits also for next time try to make the camera consist it seems liked you switch back and forth a lot just trying to help you make some better edits =)
CrotchKiller
Active member
1. he asked for editing critique, not skiing critique
2. post i video of yourself skiing better then this kid or shut your mouth.
2. post i video of yourself skiing better then this kid or shut your mouth.
Wow guys, this is awesome! This is why I love NS so much 
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I think I get what you guys are saying about the pacing and everything, definitely going to try to play with that, along with the colour.
Also going to add a more interesting intro, thanks for the idea.
When he said the shutter speed was off, did it mean having different clips in different shutter speeds? (shifting from 30fps to 60fps)?
.I think I get what you guys are saying about the pacing and everything, definitely going to try to play with that, along with the colour.
Also going to add a more interesting intro, thanks for the idea.
When he said the shutter speed was off, did it mean having different clips in different shutter speeds? (shifting from 30fps to 60fps)?