Do you guys like this logo featured in the video? For a friends clothing company.

I think i would like it more if the eye was gone but that might mess up what you were going for. Other than that it looks good.
 
is lumen meant to be a play on Illuminati? just cos it seems like the logo is a near copy of the Illuminati symbol just with some other shit going on, maybe that is what you're going for though..
 
We really liked the design of the all seeing eye but we don't want that to automatically link people to the "illumanati"
 
i feel like the lines of the eye may be too thick. it just seems like a small eye that was made too bold. maybe thin down the lines a little, and the pupil.

just my 2 cents.
 
well, you guys copied that idea so obviously people are going to think about it...
 
It looks ok, but needs some work. Make the fronds 10 percent smaller and nudge them away from the pyramid a little.

Make the tip of the pyramid larger, and make the neg space separating them a little wider.

Pull LUMEN away from the bottom of the pyramid, it's too close.

Then make that eye a little larger to compensate for the slightly larger tip, and make the strokes a little thicker.

See how that works for you, post an image of the old with the new side by side.

 
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