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mattroebke

mattroebke

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Alright alright, I have been slaving away at this website and even though it's not 100% built she's looking good. Let me know how:https://www.roebkephoto.com/ racks up so far.

(What's missing? Holes? What's full? What's good? What feeling do you get from it?) Thank's Ya'll!
 
Looks great! I'm getting a clean, trendy, and fun vibe.

Here are a few tweaks I would make:

-Have the homepage quote either clearly centered or not. Its in awkward limbo right now. I'd also make it more typographically interesting (but thats personal preference)

-Get rid of that widow on the last line of your homepage paragraph. There should be no fewer than 3 words per line.

-Make the forward/back buttons on the gallery pages much easier to find/use

-Don't make the user scroll to use the contact form. It looks nice but not the best UI

-No need to indent your paragraphs on the about page. Also consider changing that nav link to "about" instead of "Matt"

-The paragraph on the event page makes me feel like you're not that experienced with shooting events. Fake it till you make it. Don't let potential clients think you're anything but the best.

Also, where do you have a pass to? I normally ski Alpental if you want to shred.
 
Awesome, thank you Charlie. I appreciate your time too look it over!

You mean the homepage quote is misleading? or off center? The quote is all lined up center over here.

Thank you, I will work on some of the other items you've mentioned as well. I definitely don't want to make many years of work sound like no experience.

That'd be sweet, I have a pass at Stevens. I'll hit you up and we can shred.
 
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