Design critique?

[GHardie]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/51979661@N04/6337019367/

this is a design i did for this concert they have at my school every year and they printed hoodies. i didnt have all that much in the way of creative freedom but what do you think

 

[GHardie]

 

[BeerWeed]

I think that's very sick! quite creative