Dear NS...some shameless self promotion +k

vzdz

vzdz

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hey NS, i've been applying for marketing internships hoping my video skills will help me gain an edge, but I haven't had a lot of feedback. They're kind of scattered content wise, so any input how I can make them more "marketable" would be great.

+k hope you guys are having a good spring thanks for looking

http://vimeo.com/1343286
 
If you are trying to use that video that you posted for a professional type of thing(portfolio, application, etc.), I would recommend taking out the inappropriate things.

Other than that, I liked it.
 
i didnt really like it. the editing was cool in a way, but all i got out of it was that you can shoot time lapses and a couple other things.
 
Dude, i like your style, at first i was thinking you should be more "professional" but i can see that in your way, your doing everything perfect. Everything in there is styled in your own way, and its super sick.
 
i like the editing, i think that you should partner up with someone who has great filming skills.

because your editing capabilities are very strong, however the shots themselves could use some work.

as far as being 'marketable', maybe find a theme that people can follow and relate to.
 
pretty nice but a couple of things...

I saw in some of ur other vids there was some more chill stuff and idk if this is just me but everything seemed fast and hectic in this vid.

so slow some stuff down.

also, try taking some shots of people playing sports and incorporate them.

other than that... real nice work editing and filming
 
there was a butt hanging out and i think the party-type sequence i guess could be seen as inappropriate, also some language in the song. i agree with uni-corn, not that im against inappropriateness, but those things aren't going to help in a professional setting. good luck duude
 
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