Critique por favor

CrotchKiller

CrotchKiller

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Edit of two of the spots i have filmed my friends at so far this year. I know some people dont like all the slow-mo but i thought it worked well with the song and i really wanted to use the Floyd song.

This is one of my favorite edits i have made because i feel like everything came together(except for the lighting at the second rail)

Warning: Snowboarding edit, not a lot of skiers hit urban at my college.

Thanks, Jake Marshall
 
Seemed to slow, i ended up skipping around. Using some full speed shots wouldve been nice. Some of the pans seemed a little behind where they shouldve been and the openning glide cam shots (im guess the movement was from a glide cam) were a little sloppy.
 
filming was really good, but IMO it would be better if there was only some slow-mo. Also, at the first rail, there were like 5 shots of the same trick. They might have been different people, but they were the same thing. But other than those two things the edit was great.
 
do you mean wasn't only slow-mo? Everything was in slow-mo. And ya i hear ya on the repetitive tricks, just trying to put out a good edit AND include all my friends haha. Thank you for the critique!
 
sorry that came out wrong. There was too much slow-mo. IMO it would be much better if only half of the clips were in slow-mo.
 
ya i gotcha. I generally dont like all slow-mo edits but i felt it worked with the song. Next edit will be a nice mix for sure.
 
just some of the opening shots couldve been smoother, some smoothcam couldve helped
 
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