Critique please

[lanny94]

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first edit ive made just lookin for some critism im already aware of the shaky shots.

 

[SteezoSaurus]

Looked like some fun cliff jumping. Have you thought of investing some money into a gopro? You can get some sick POV/underwater shots, which would look dope with that nice waterfall you guys are sessioning.

 

[lukewalnuts]

those are some sick spots!

what general area were you in?

 

[j.benziger]

yeah i really want to sesh those spots and other thhan the shakey shots your edit was pretty decent

 

[Gmart]

^ he's right a go pro would have mad this a much better edit but not bad, i didnt like the black screen at the end just fade the song out

 

[lanny94]

i have a gopro but the only times i had it where on the rope swing and the bridge and they didnt look all that great

 

[lanny94]

o and we were in bellingham washington, and the rest are shots from around vancouver,bc

 

[cgibbs2]

lol

 

[Stang*]

The shots were good besides the fact that they were shaky of course. There are a few things i would change:
1. There were a couple of shots that were really under exposed, and over exposed.
2. I also noticed that there were shots with some random audio in it. Like your mom cheering or something? Normally it wouldn't bother me but it just didn't work in a couple of shots in my opinion.
But the shots themselves are good and the ideas behind them. Good edit, but those are just some of my opinions.