Critique on camping edit please?

[DBL]

I went camping with my family at Sandbanks provincial park for 4 days and brought my camera along.

Please be very harsh, I am just beginning so the more I can learn from my mistakes the better I will get!

I already know there are missing transitions and the transitions that are in are not very smooth.

Filmed on a T2i with kit lens

Thanks M&A

Sandbanks trip 2012 from Daniel Beamish-Lavoie on Vimeo.

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[.ZT.]

That was great! Call it a camping video, not edit.... Transitioning could use work but I love the filming!

 

[Notcrotchkiller]

filming time with the homies is the best.

 

[SSteezle]

did that little kid at 1:46 say "this fucking bitch ass funny"?