Critique of my new video teaser? +kkk

RZcrew

RZcrew

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hey so i just made a teaser for my first full length video and id really like for a critue on the editing since this is really the first time ive ever tried to make something like it.Please be harsh and be honest!

 
That was fucking awesome! The best critique my edit i have seen on this sight for a while, song went great with the videos audio over the song was perfect. You nailed it! cant wait to see the full video man!
 
That was really good! Follow shots were a little shaky, so im assuming you don't have a glidecam, but your filming was awesome using the equipment you had.
 
That was great!I can see you have shot in a flat picture style,so you should do something about the colours in the teaser, and last, fade out on the song instead of just cutting it there...

Other than that, I'll definitely see the movie,looking forward to it!

 
Yeah I'm all for not making the colors look pukey but that was a bit too "drained". I also agree with the post above me about the song ending harshly. Looks killer though!
 
I'd work on composition of the shots. In a lot of them the skier gets cut off or the isn't very good framing to begin with. A lot of the shots are shakey so work on stabilization of the camera and keep things smooth. Color is bland and the exposure of shots could be better.
 
Real dope teaser! Only thing I would say is that the ending sort of felt abrupt. Maybe try to fade the song and title a little.
 
Most of the shots were too flat/dark. Also there was a lot of banding (look at the sky in some of the shots at the end), not sure what from. Could just be youtube but it might be the export settings or something like that. but as far as the actual content/editing it was sick. Would definitely watch.
 
Yeah im not really sure what happened to the colours, they seem a lot less dead on my computer. I agree it ended super shortly and abrupt but i wasn't really sure how else to do that any suggestions on that for next time? Anyone else have a critique?
 
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