Critique my title sequence

Same song as AOF... haha, kind of hard to take it seriously with that but I realize this isn't too serious and it is being shown to gapers so thats fine. I dunno, honestly most title sequences aren't great but some really stick out as great. I have spent a lot of time on this website: http://www.artofthetitle.com/titles/ I really like it when a title tells a story in an interesting way that introduces the film. Obviously this is hard to do so I am really not judging you. I did feel like the shots were a bit repetitive and that the font was a little hipster generic but again, personal preferences, don't get your feelings hurt. So all in all, I thought it was fine but not great, even AOF's title sequence told a story, the story of T. Rice getting ready to go shred. The titles built anticipation for the movie. These are just my personal critiques since you asked for them. Nice job, Rock on!
 
When you shoot a timelapse, scale in so that the frame size matches your sequence.
 
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