Critique My Shit Hardcore Eh?

MadSteezin

MadSteezin

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So I made two electronic/electronica/trance/techno/rave/dance/club or w/e you wanna call it. The name of the songs are Neu Tek and then the other one is Orange Peels.

In Neu Tek I'm gonna add lyrics and what not but for the mean time i just wanna see if I'm on the right start...

Orange Peels is another story its not gonna be too lyrical, maybe some shout outs and what not, but same thing i wanna see if im headed in the right direction...

So go here and listen to them and get back to me thanks! -Kookie Monsta (aka Patrick Fesler)

http://www.thesixtyone.com/kookiemonsta/music/
 
I'm likin it pat. you have to make the echoes less echo-ey though so you can actually hear what you're saying in neu tek. And make everything flow more so it's not completely separate. Each part is fuckin legit though, nice work on the first songs. the white hyph beat you did for me was ridiculous too I think you got some talent here bud
 
i dig it kid... the voice creeps me out hard, i know your going for the madlib/stonesthrow deal but i would work on making it a lil less creeper... the only thing from a musical standpoint that i can see you need to work on is transitions between sections and maybe some more tempo changes... if you can pull of quick smooth transitions between different times i think it sounds awesome as well as keeps the listner guessing/interested... um maybe a few more really odd sounds incorperated too... i always like to hear that... real good so far though, i am impressed
 
not bad dude

personally i would like them if there was a little more umph

if you get what i mean

but yeah dude they're sweet keep up the good work :]
 
LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I guess the my voice in high pitch is kind of creepy.

But for sure I'll work on trannys and tempo change. thanks for the input!
 
yeah i think thad definatly be better. I dont really mind the echoe that much but the high pitch gets to me. In my opinion i think there should be like more umph like the other guy said, like more bass possibly.
 
its pretty good. try to add more dimension to it though, u know like a broader spectrum of sound. try to get unpredictable melodies that still sounds really good.
 
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