Critique My New Video. Thanks

[DavidRoss]

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[GrindEdit]

this sucks....^regular newschooler

haha jk this is sick!

 

[ktd619]

Fade out at the end...kind of ended abruptly.

Also im i ski BMBW quite often! i liked it!

 

[Raz.]

my only thought would be to add some color correction

 

[HoughtonHuffton]

Slight colour correction would make it pretty much perfect.

 

[Mkvackay]

get better with your tripod. some of your movements are pretty jarring

also don't show the start of your pan. pretty standard

 

[Tanner-D]

video seemed flat as far as colors

 

[Dub_Digital]

a lot of your shots were under exposed, and it seemed like you panned to the rail everytime, its fine to do a pan to vary your shots, but gets repetitive, ....also i feel like this song has been used in a ski edit/movie? cant think of what though...

 

[skitheWest.]

needs more skiing. and a better ending...

 

[JAHrig]

I think you used the pan from left to right way way too much . Try some different camera movements and some still frames. The repetitiveness really was the main thing I noticed. Other then that more skiers!! I did like the intro shot with the water drops!.

 

[eheath]

.... what does that even mean? i've never seen you post in here before, have you ever made a video in your life?

 

[JAHrig]

Also something i have learned in my film classes is always have the first few frames black to give

 

[JAHrig]

The viewer time to adjust or transition into the clips

 

[DavidRoss]

Thanks for all the input. Sadly i did this video in WMM becuase vegas gives me the worst technical errors so i couldnt color correct or anything. But thanks everyone!

 

[finchski]

just cause he doesnt make edits doesnt mean he doesnt watch edits, its his opinion you do need to make an edit to notice colour correction

 

[DavidRoss]

Let's all get along.... just kidding have at it.

 

[cwillygood]

idk what you were filming with, but if you can id try and bump up the ISO just a little bit more and put the aperature as low as you can so it lets more light in, when your filming at night, they night shots were pretty dark

 

[DavidRoss]

60D with 18-55 uhmmm at 1080 24p for night and i think for day aswell. yah i agree but i was getting awful ghosting the more i played with the settings to get it brighter.