Critique my First Short Film Please ++++++++K

[AK_Media]

This is my first short film, real short film. It casted, I wrote it, the whole shabang. Give it a look, give it a comment. Thanks guys!

Young Money from Andrew Keyser on Vimeo.

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[gravel]

Really really really really well done. I thought that was great. Only quarrel that I'd have with it is that the ending was a little quicker than I might have liked, but overall incredible.

 

[AK_Media]

I agree, it was rushed due to time constraints with the actors, especially the kid actor

 

[De-Clan]

real dope (pun intended)

 

[homestar]

That was really good. The only issue I had was that some of the audio was too quiet.

 

[*Fujative*]

Very nice overall. Story was good. Like already mentioned, it could have been a little shorter.

Ha, for future reference if you want to show someone snorting, used powder milked!