Critique my first edit

[chunk.]

A buddy and I took a trip up to nubs nob and I got some footage and decided to make an edit. My computer has been fucked up for a while now and I didn't have the money to get a new one so I made the edit on my phone. I'm just looking for basic constructive criticism. Thanks for any tips.

[video]https://vimeo.com/134528265[/video]

**This thread was edited on Jul 28th 2015 at 3:20:16am

 

[chunk.]

Also, this is my buddies first year skiing in the park so we didn't have a very deep bag of tricks to work with.

 

[CHU-TANG_CLAN]

pretty good man but i would say use less fade transitions. the snow spray to fade was pretty dece. good placement of filler shots too

 

[CHU-TANG_CLAN]

also try adding some grabs to your spins. i know you say its your first year but just go for it man it will help with your progression and style

 

[chunk.]

pretty good man but i would say use less fade transitions. the snow spray to fade was pretty dece. good placement of filler shots too

Thanks for the input man, appreciate it. +k

 

[eheath]

Overall, not too bad for your first try, two big things. 1 dont use cross fades, cut to the beat, looks cleaner and 2 when you film, get closer, alot of your shots are too wide. Keep filming and editing itll get easier and you'll produce a better video.

 

[chunk.]

Overall, not too bad for your first try, two big things. 1 dont use cross fades, cut to the beat, looks cleaner and 2 when you film, get closer, alot of your shots are too wide. Keep filming and editing itll get easier and you'll produce a better video.

Thanks for the input!