Critique my first edit!

DBL

DBL

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Hi M&A,I just made this season edit and i'm very happy about it, even though it wont compare to a half decent edit IMO.

It was all filmed on GoPro, so obviously its not great, tried my best to color correct all the shots, the sunny ones were extremely exposed and bright.

I just wanted some feedback,

Thanks!

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1- Your aspect ratio was wack2- You need to work on stabilization so you can get steady shots

3- The song was only meh imo

4- As you said most shots were over exposed

5- Get tighter shots, in some shots you were so far away and the skier was only a speck in the frame

6- I wouldn't use the Gopro's audio cause it sucks

7- I'd work on the flow of your edit

8 I'd work on a better intro

You did a decent job for working with a Gopro and having this be your first edit. I really enjoyed the cliff/pillow POV clips, but I would've liked more if the camera was just a tad bit less down-facing.
 
Thanks! I was the one skiing, forgot to mention it was friends filming! And I'm buying an hv40 next year and having a buddy who's into filming film!
 
AHhh ok didnt know that man. Well then for your first edit(editing) I thought you did a pretty good job. I'd look further into other options for cameras though! An HV40 may be perfect for you but I personally fucking hate tapes....
 
the major thing i noticed that you could fix is the stabilization. maybe tripod the gopro and hike, it allows you to get a better frame than a follow cam from someone who isnt as good at filming as you would like.

colors cant really be helped with a gopro, you did your best, but ya that overexposure is a PITA with gopros

maybe invest a little time into learning a few different fades, wipes, and maybe even masks to use as transitions?

Im new to the community and also just put out my first edit with a gopro, so im not an expert, but these are just a few things that i noticed. Gl with future edits :)

-Flame
 
You can easily stabilize the gopro when you mount it on a stick...

also try not to look into the lense when you start filming cause it fucks up the colours, try to focus it on the obstacle.
 
Your video got letterboxed because you filmed in 960p, which most editing programs and players don't support (I know Youtube doesn't but I don't know about NS, I assume not.) The black around the edges is automatically added, which will make the picture smaller and not look as good. Try filming in 720 or 1080 and it shouldn't be an issue. You can also get your shots in 960 down to 720 by taking off 120 pixels from the top and bottom (You can use mpeg streamclip for this, it's free to download.)

It's not that hard to make a pole mount out of the mounts GoPro gives you, there's a lot of tutorials and stuff around NS and the internet beyond. It will make follow cams way better, and you can also do some swing cams which are relatively smooth but are more interesting and easier than a using a tripod, especially for lapping. While it would be ideal, it's not always practical to stop for a while to set up a shot.

I don't know which editing program you use and what you're doing your color correcting with, but the overexposed whites are fairly simple to fix with FCP.

Get closer. Gopro shots look best when the subject is less then 30ft away.

I know none of that helps really with the actual editing, but it should help make your shots look better. I think that the best looking parts of your edit were from your helmet shots.

Good luck, it was fun to watch
 
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