Critique my first edit

[c.hale]

https://newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/421399/cat/latest/

Filmed on my GoPro. I downloaded Adobe Premier Pro trial and made this edit in a few hours. It's my first try so its not too polished. I'll throw it on vimeo later for higher quality.

Fire away!

 

[grilledsteezeyo]

Courtesy of Newschoolers.com

awesome job! although, i would leave more footage of the rider skiing away from his trick. it seemed a few of the landings were cut short

 

[plaire]

great filming, but def more ride away time. now that you are confident getting basic and smooth shots, try skiing switch infront if the skier looking back, it looks so sick for rails