Critique my first attempt at making a electronic song

[Noss.]

http://www.mediafire.com/?yd9jt7taep5u8o3

Check it out, first time ever doing this and I thought it sounded kinda cool. Did it on garage band so dont hate. Give me some feedback thanks!!

 

[meth_time]

put it on soundcloud.

I don't want to download anything.