Critique my edit

gorilas

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This is really my first edit and my brother and I didnt film to much so I know it can only be so good. Let me know whats good whats bad and what I should change. Does the music fit? A few people told me the music sucks but I think its just cuz they have different tastes in music. Thank you for your feed back

[video]https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/900563/Iffy-Ski-edit-mp4[/video]

**This thread was edited on Apr 9th 2018 at 11:56:57am
 
Props for using Mobb Deep, definetly liked the music but I think it was a bit slow for this edit. The Intro of the edit was too long and I think also the inruns of some of the hits were way too long. Filming could be better and you could maybe look into some basic color grading. Overall it still was a solid first edit!
 
13913868:Whiteout_ said:
Props for using Mobb Deep, definetly liked the music but I think it was a bit slow for this edit. The Intro of the edit was too long and I think also the inruns of some of the hits were way too long. Filming could be better and you could maybe look into some basic color grading. Overall it still was a solid first edit!

Ok thanks, ill look into that
 
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