Critique my edit!

[Cadenmccullough]

Had a pretty successful season, didn't film to much but threw together some shots! Let me know what you think and any tips or whatevs.
https://www.newschoolers.com/videos/watch/866861/Caden-McCullough-16-17-Season

 

[The.Fish]

I loved all of it except the fact that you started a new song that lasted for 20 seconds and then the video mysteriously ended.

 

[iFlip]

I loved all of it except the fact that you started a new song that lasted for 20 seconds and then the video mysteriously ended.

This guy gets it. Also, where are your poles?

 

[leesta10k]

really solid edit bro. only thing i can think of is maybe better editing/filming but it's really good as is

 

[The.Fish]

This guy gets it. Also, where are your poles?

In my car.

 

[mr-mcsteeze]

i felt with some of your tricks your upper body was a little flaily like your arms would be all over the place and a few handdrags but overall it was sick.

 

[littleman34]

jumpline clips were sick, and that backcountry flip was too. i like more steezy buttery tricks though

 

[Manswanseth]

This is dope man, btw whats the trick at 1:02? Looks like some switch misty or something.

 

[Cadenmccullough]

This is dope man, btw whats the trick at 1:02? Looks like some switch misty or something.

It's a sw rodeo. I was just pretty early so my tips scooped and made it look kinda funky.

 

[dan38]

made it look kinda funky.

Very Funky

 

[tomatonater]

So sick dude!! I liked your stee but coulda used more afterbang since its a vid, but overall sick vid!

 

[jordanj801]

Pretty solid. Only suggestion would be to have the clips go with the beat of the song. The song is just kinda in the background

 

[pussyfooter]

it is funky funky funky

 

[death_grips]

Skiing is sick but edit needs some work. Look at making the clips stylistically consistant, e.g. Using same crop and white balance. Also attention to detail like making sure thumbs aren't covering the lens and that sort of thing good job tho my dude

 

[brockmoules]

Really good, I'd just clean up your landings on a few of the clips. Trust me it's worth it, even if it takes hours of extra filming.

 

[_____alfredo____]

That was funked man try 2 afterbang harder

 

[WPMatt]

Use 1 song. You need to be more creative in your shots, the skiing is super solid, but it looks like every other park edit because the shots are the same, play around with angles ect. Just work on the quality...